Wednesday, December 3, 2008

PRINTS







Paul-

I have been working on two completely new images and decided to scrap the one with the dandelions all together. Your opinion on the first and second images would be great, I'm pretty confident in the first, but am not so sure the second fits as well because of the lens distortion that isn't present in any of the others. - as well as the actual birds.  As far as the third image goes, I took your advice and covered up some of the bright white in the clouds, as well as worked on making the foreground with the fence less flat- I also decided to ditch the idea of the texture over the red brick and just mute the color a little. So hopefully its working better?  The fourth image i just slightly altered, making the building larger and the background more out of focus....  My major issue is with the last image.  I decided that the sign being so close to the front of the image wasn't allowing my eye to move into the background, so i just pushed it back, and took the layer with the ivy off, the original lighting made it pop a bit more.  I also added some shadows in the foreground, It was a simple solution and I think it looks a lot better, but I still am not completely sure thats enough.  Do you think It would be in my best interest to just try to put together a totally different image in its place?  

Thanks for your feedback!
Carrie

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